Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Matt and the Fruit Bat

Matt was a scardycat. He had a son who was a major brat and also owned a fruit bat. One day the fruit bat pushed matt off of a tiger cat. He then fell on a big wombat. In his anger he took out a bat and tried to hit a rat. Instead he hit the thermostat. Then he went to his habitat and lived with his friend the democrat.

5 comments:

  1. Ha! I like the rhyming and somewhat nonsensical story line. Nice job.

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  2. The rhyming and rhythm to this poem is wonderful. You could play with line breaks and format on the page in a lot of ways too. Happy Slicing!

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  3. I really liked the way you rhymed this

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  4. I like the rhymes and the chaotic storyline!

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